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Age/Gender: 23, Male
Location: Maryland
Job: make music on ng
hey newground users. this is my second account! i split up from BMC-audio, check it out. and my other friend has a new account too, x-Exodus-X.
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not bad, but it gets boring after a while. a little shrill at 1:12 wouldn't you say? hmm... w/e. cool radio sounds, just... switch it up on us a little.
3/5
-crepth
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the first climax thing was really a let down, the beat wasn't strong enough. pretty cool tune though, just, maybe a little too generic for me. also, find a better snare. and finally, make it less repetitive... ~yeah-_-
3/5
-crepth
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yeah, i thought of donkey kong country underwater level too! perfect job getting across that feel, like with the echoing percussion. the strings that came in at like 2/3rds was really nice.
maybe you should have made that bass less pangy and a little dryer. idk, just me.
5/5
-crepth
Author's Response:
It's possible. I will be trying a few things with the remix I'm working.
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it reminds me of this song
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/61197
except mine was partially on rhythm... lols, oh well just work on the melody and timing. also get better percussion. 3/5
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u didnt change anything... even though you made it well, like mastering-wise, itsno different... switch it up if you resubmit it.
2/5
Author's Response:
it is meant to be the most faithful to te original...
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if the only thing in your song is vocals, dont make it really soft. it sounds like you're mumbling this is the corner of a room like crying or something... the reverb is really off. and your singing gets a little nasally. i dont think this would really hold up in an album if you have no bg music. and dont have AIM up either... somebody logged in...
0/5
Author's Response:
Sorry. Thanx 4 da tipz.
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you know, normally im not the biggest fan of breakbeat, but this was an amazing one. great intro, interesting drums, sweet bass and 'funky' thing there. the sound effects you chose worked really well too. that was a really cool intustrial-type thing at 2:43.5. but one last thing... i think the ending could have been stringer.
5/5 10/10, great job! 'n if its not too much to ask, u think you could drop by my page and check out my new song, Crepth- Renewal. (and comments are greatly appreciated :p)
-crepth
Author's Response:
thanks for the sweet review mate. I felt as though my music production (as far as dnb goes) was going in just one direction so I felt the need to try to change it up a bit. I didn't put as much effort into this one as I would have liked but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless :) Will check your track out.
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this was pretty catchy, and i liked the beginning, part. but at 0:44 it became pretty muddy and everything was a lil hard to hear.
maybe take some reverb off the drums, that would help.
also, even though it was a great one, i think you should have changed the melody up a little more.
overall, pretty cool^^ 4/5 and if you could do you think you could check out my new song, Crepth- Renewal? it would be helpful.
-crepth
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i liked it. pretty cool instruments, a lil different chord progression from whats normally out there, good melody (iknow ill have it stuck up in the noggin for a while)
but i think you should have changed it a little bit through out the song, it got a bit boring after a while, dispite the change of intruments and percussion. cool switch up with the piano. nice drums (kick mainly)
5/5 8/10 great job, just work on the variation. oh, almost forgot, im not against semi-abrupt endings, but i think this one was a lil too much.
-crepth
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i like the airy peaceful feel a lot. i know i said it before but ill say it again, i think the quiet 'ooooo' pad in the bg should have been a lot louder. it was just such a nice sound and a catchy melody. if you resubmit it after revising it i would want to hear more of that. nice clap. and hi hats. speaking of drums i think that kick was cool except i dont think it should have had the hat sounding along with it. the beginning measures was the only time i noticed it a lot. sweet mellow bass, it was well mastered.
im alright with the piano solo being in there, it fits nicely, but it wasn't a very strong melody... well, it could have been better... i'll say that.
the flangus fade in at 2:20ish was a really nice feature!
i can see the part from 2:40 on to 3:00 being a great menu song for some game. il l send by brother a link and suggest it to be put in a game.^^
5/5 ill pm if i ever make a full 8bit and submit it or if i submit that renewal one...
-crepth
Author's Response:
Thanks for your great review crepth! As a response to what you said, I know what you mean by the hi hats, but I felt the build sounded better with them than without them. Thanks for all the compliments, i'm glad you liked it!
The piano melody I agree with you completely, I was having trouble finding good melodies for that chord progression.
Thanks again for the awesome review, i'll make sure to review yours equally well when (if!) you submit one, which i'm looking forward to you doing btw! :D
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