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Neon-Crepth

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meh,

drums are too dominant, it sounds just like the original too, branch out man.
3/5
-crepth

ha, sweet man!

all the melodies and everything were really good, i dont know how much you changed it from the original though, so i dont know if i should give you the credit...
bad choice of hi hat, and waaaay too noisey at times, just tone it down and it will be the best.
5/5
-crepth

yay sonic!

cool hihats. nice square-type things, the dble-kick part was a little empty though.
4/5
-crepth

Gorekiller responds:

Hey thanks ! Yeah, this is an "unfinished" version... I'll make it better and RE-upload it. Thanks for the review !

really great man!^^

i loved the airy sound of the song; had a nice feel. it got a lil muddy at times b/c of that though, so just keep a listen for that. cool sounding drums, nice synths, good variation and timing of variation of melody; it really kept me listening and bobbing my head. nice sfx. well thought out mastering. w/e your fellow artists told you, it really paid off. nice job on this one!
5/5
-crepth

dragonsteak responds:

thanks a lot mate, some other people have pointed out some clipping issues so I guess I'll jack up my soft clipper... thanks for the support though!

coolsong man

wyldfyre just means that the intruments are really generic, and i agree. like the main synth, its that basic saw thats sharp and shwooshy... not a very good adjective but yaeh. same thing with that wet acidbass.
its really repetitive and gets boring about half way through. and some more melodies in there.
3/5
-crepth

HelgiB responds:

alright, but the song is just in about 02 mins. I don't realy seem to notice the bass getting repeative. That bass is called Pitch Bass many artist use it. :D
any thank you for the review.

lol, k.Chezzi....

yeah, im not going to ask you why you called it chezzi, but i woud suggest choosing a mroe captivating title. honestly, after reading it i was like, okay this is not going to be good at all. so, yeah....
but the song is really good, thedifferent parts of the song are really different and it keeps things interesting, uhhh, i knwo there were a few off tempo things but i won't bother u about that b/c it was a minor mistake. i think you should have run it through an equilizer to get rid of some junk noise. also it gets a lil' too loud at parts.

overall, i think it was really nice song, interesting composing. and ill look at more of your future stuff.
5/5
-crepth

kiwifish responds:

thank you for the review.
yeah maybe the title is a bad idea.
I'd be happy to suggetions for a different title! I really couldn't think of anything ... lol.

what were you thinking.

you're right its not that good, its like not even music. honestly, you need to develop a musical ear, cause that was just a loud, deep buzzing noise with some string. i dont think you should have submitted this... sorry.
0/5. get some structure and a little melody going, and dont make things repetitive.
-crepth

Smidly responds:

I certainly agree. Although I cant help but wonder what stopped you from voting a 1? If I improve on it im keeping the buzz though.

good idea but...

good idea but you didn't really do anything with it, i think with a little bit more effort it could have been way better. nice job though. and dont hold back on the drums, they were really quiet and dull.
4/5
-crepth

JinNJuice responds:

Perhaps you do not understand the emotions that I feel.

definitely not bad but...

definitely not bad, but its all you ever do. your songs all have those same instruments. start branching out into other styles, its just not interesting to listen to because i feel i've heard it a hundred times in your other songs already.
what im getting at is that you should change up your ...'way' i guess, i can't really find the right word...
4/5
-crepth

you've improved!

from the first three submissions i discovered you with, you've improved a lot! i the drums, being the loudest thing in the song should have been varied more. and the melody was really repetitive. it did however get my head bobbin'
4/5.
-crepth

Mr-Carrothead responds:

thanks dude :D
nice hearin' from ya again

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