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Age/Gender: 23, Male
Location: Maryland
Job: make music on ng
hey newground users. this is my second account! i split up from BMC-audio, check it out. and my other friend has a new account too, x-Exodus-X.
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good idea but you didn't really do anything with it, i think with a little bit more effort it could have been way better. nice job though. and dont hold back on the drums, they were really quiet and dull.
4/5
-crepth
Author's Response:
Perhaps you do not understand the emotions that I feel.
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definitely not bad, but its all you ever do. your songs all have those same instruments. start branching out into other styles, its just not interesting to listen to because i feel i've heard it a hundred times in your other songs already.
what im getting at is that you should change up your ...'way' i guess, i can't really find the right word...
4/5
-crepth
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from the first three submissions i discovered you with, you've improved a lot! i the drums, being the loudest thing in the song should have been varied more. and the melody was really repetitive. it did however get my head bobbin'
4/5.
-crepth
Author's Response:
thanks dude :D
nice hearin' from ya again
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i think it was a little too sharp and pangy just me though, and im sure you realized it and/or went for that. nice job though.
4/5
-crepth
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catchy and all, but go easy on the reverb. it all sounds like its it an empty room and it takes away stuff...
i would have toned down the clavichord thing too, resonance-wise.
-crepth
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i really enjoyed the first part and just the way it sounded together. but i think it progressively lost that feel through the song and it made it a lot worse. it would have been nice to hear a digital-like wah wah-kinda thing in a melody. great concept, just lacking those things.
4/5.
-crepth
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everything is pretty much great. the vocals are a little better than what i remember it used to be. try recording it in a bathroom, that might help. the vocals just dont match the rest of the song. its like the instruments are close and their sound bounces off a distant wall when the vocals are in a tight confined space which the instruments are sitting on top of. ...better though. i wouldn't bother to redo this again, just try making the vocals better in yur other songs.
5/5
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for your review! I really needed that!
Hmm... a bathroom? Maybe a reverb effect will simulate that.
I'm trying to interpret 4th sentence of your review... and I think the "distant wall" is the delay effect for the synth guitars. I'll keep that in mind.
Hehe... too late. I'm redoing the vocal tracks on the song after getting a new mic.
Again, many, many thanks for your review! ^_^
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this had nice drums, Awesome!- bass line, and well mastered guitar. but the only thing i had a problem with was the singing. i don't know if it was the voice itself or the over pronunciation, but whichever one it was it wasn't as good as it could have sounded (reverb and filtering-wise)
4/5. nice job man. check out my songs if you have the time! thnx
-crepth
Author's Response:
Hmm... maybe it's just the mastering. I did some remastering, by the way. Check if the problem is still there.
I'll pass by your site soon. Thanks for the review! ^_^
Remastered 192kbps version here: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/106651
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creating a new genre are we? XD this is like a retro industrial club thingy. VERY cool.
the beginning reminded me of Shoes. but then it got much better. extremely catchy.
a DL from me 10/10 and 5/5. you've gotta do more of these!
-crepth
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nice 8bit man. all it needs is some of those sweet 8bit percussions! (also, next time don't go as crazy with the panning. just my opinion though...)
4/5 'cause of the lack of percussion.
-crepth
Author's Response:
Well I don't really get what you are trying to say lol
Anyways, I did this song on my childhood keyboards, like I've said. It doesn't have many effects. Actually, it lacks of effects very much lol Thanx in any case. I'll try to make better songies in the future. :)
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