Score: 8

"well"

submission: HyperRave - Second

date: April 8, 2008

it never picked up. it never had a bass where you really got into it and it would run through you, you need that deep, background drive. the kick was compressed the whole way through also. and you have toomuchacrowd syndrome... crowd can be good sometimes but you overused it.

work on getting an amazing climax. i wouldn't say leave it to the pros. id say work on getting pro.
4/5

-crepth

Score: 2

"you're right..."

submission: We Party Hard

date: April 6, 2008

you DON't have to say F*** every other word, but you need to enunciate and not use gay lyrics like we party hard in the yard...
its just the same stupid rap melody for2 minutes with you trying to record you voice (add variety). and dont end songs with this is "blank" out.
i think that was constructive enough, so don't complain that i was mean or something.
1/5

Score: 9

"cool"

submission: Silence (Short Version)

date: April 6, 2008

mellow out the bass for the full version. nice pan flute thing around 2:00.
also those celebra saw things or whatever they were sounded cool in the beginning but around the end they weren't fitting.
5/5

-crepth

Score: 8

"very pleasant"

submission: ~.D.~ :where is She?:

date: April 3, 2008

it sets a nice mood i think it was the one you were going for. it seems sad yet hopeful. the bass clef is workin' its stuff pretty well, i liek the way it meshes a little with the treble. when the music stopped and went into another section i think that could have been segwayed better; have more of a connection between the two parts. nice strings. overall the quality of the instruments are good but they could be EQed a little more precisely. nice composition over all, the song does its job...
5/5

-crepth

Score: 6

"not bad since you're only starting out."

submission: DDSmooth

date: March 30, 2008

i listened to the other one you posted, that was bad... you went crazy with the background noise and that hurt the song. i would say since you're not putting that much melody it the songs you really need to work on what you have- pads and drums with occasional sfx. master them. press F9 when you're in FL. if you have more questions about that PM me...
:no rating

-crepth

Score: 7

"this isn't that bad"

submission: DV-A Strange New Land (intro)

date: March 30, 2008

it had pretty good instruments... but really, how bad can you go with FL sytrus (which is what i assume you use) yeah the drums were quite quiet and the clap was noobish. you have a good idea for a song, but your inability to elaborate on the idea is holding you back. -add onto it and make more melodies, and change up the drums a little.
3/5

-crepth

Score: 9

"uhm,"

submission: -(Cat's Pajamas)-

date: March 29, 2008

pretty cool. you're right, really repetitive... good thing you at least have that softer part in there. kinda cool percussion. maybe a little too much reverb on the clap, don't you think? muddied things up there... aaaaannnddd um. oh yeah, the bass. you were probably going for it but it seemed a little dirty. i think it might have been chorus on it? anyways, i would have changed that.
great song though. nice job.
4/5

-crepth

Score: 6

"well"

submission: Mods de chocobo remix

date: March 29, 2008

not bad really, i guess

you had a really bad first impression on us. work on that part of the song... it is arguably the most important part o.O other than that it's pretty basic. instruments could be tightened up a bit. work more on changing it from it's original if it's a remix as well.

3/5
-crepth

Score: 9

"damn yo..."

submission: Far Away - Preview - [viz]

date: March 29, 2008

i loved that intro, so smooth and the vocals are very well used. after the intro however i don't think it was strong enough. more kick in that part. percussion besides that was pretty good. more bass definitely, that was the thing its missing the most. cool instrument around :43 the instruments are good. but i can see this song being the same thing over and over and just switching instruments. get a larger variety in the melody. it's great now, but needs more variety and it's on its way to being awesome. pm when you submit it.

4/5

-crepth

Score: 9

"great!"

submission: -Orr- A Day in the Village

date: March 27, 2008

this really set that mood of village life. happy and walking pace strings and woodwinds. the only thing i would have changed is the reverb. it's a little too distant. the way i envision a village is tight and cozy. but with that reverb it seems wide and open. you may have wanted it like that, but i just wanted to point it out^^
4/5

-crepth