Neon-Crepth's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[++ Underwater Observatory ++]

sweet!

yeah, i thought of donkey kong country underwater level too! perfect job getting across that feel, like with the echoing percussion. the strings that came in at like 2/3rds was really nice.

maybe you should have made that bass less pangy and a little dryer. idk, just me.
5/5

-crepth

kelwynshade responds:

It's possible. I will be trying a few things with the remix I'm working.

[\Virus/]

uhh well...

it reminds me of this song

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/61197

except mine was partially on rhythm... lols, oh well just work on the melody and timing. also get better percussion. 3/5

[Zelda's Lullaby (loop)]

o.O

u didnt change anything... even though you made it well, like mastering-wise, itsno different... switch it up if you resubmit it.

2/5

The-MickMad responds:

it is meant to be the most faithful to te original...

[You're Kinda Funny]

wth?

if the only thing in your song is vocals, dont make it really soft. it sounds like you're mumbling this is the corner of a room like crying or something... the reverb is really off. and your singing gets a little nasally. i dont think this would really hold up in an album if you have no bg music. and dont have AIM up either... somebody logged in...

0/5

MrSwauv responds:

Sorry. Thanx 4 da tipz.

[Turbulance reason4edit]

cool but...

this was pretty catchy, and i liked the beginning, part. but at 0:44 it became pretty muddy and everything was a lil hard to hear.
maybe take some reverb off the drums, that would help.
also, even though it was a great one, i think you should have changed the melody up a little more.

overall, pretty cool^^ 4/5 and if you could do you think you could check out my new song, Crepth- Renewal? it would be helpful.

-crepth

[[TMM43]Ride on Me [E]]

sweet!

i liked it. pretty cool instruments, a lil different chord progression from whats normally out there, good melody (iknow ill have it stuck up in the noggin for a while)
but i think you should have changed it a little bit through out the song, it got a bit boring after a while, dispite the change of intruments and percussion. cool switch up with the piano. nice drums (kick mainly)

5/5 8/10 great job, just work on the variation. oh, almost forgot, im not against semi-abrupt endings, but i think this one was a lil too much.

-crepth

[Riding the Wind]

really nice

i like the airy peaceful feel a lot. i know i said it before but ill say it again, i think the quiet 'ooooo' pad in the bg should have been a lot louder. it was just such a nice sound and a catchy melody. if you resubmit it after revising it i would want to hear more of that. nice clap. and hi hats. speaking of drums i think that kick was cool except i dont think it should have had the hat sounding along with it. the beginning measures was the only time i noticed it a lot. sweet mellow bass, it was well mastered.

im alright with the piano solo being in there, it fits nicely, but it wasn't a very strong melody... well, it could have been better... i'll say that.
the flangus fade in at 2:20ish was a really nice feature!
i can see the part from 2:40 on to 3:00 being a great menu song for some game. il l send by brother a link and suggest it to be put in a game.^^

5/5 ill pm if i ever make a full 8bit and submit it or if i submit that renewal one...

-crepth

x-Exodus-X responds:

Thanks for your great review crepth! As a response to what you said, I know what you mean by the hi hats, but I felt the build sounded better with them than without them. Thanks for all the compliments, i'm glad you liked it!
The piano melody I agree with you completely, I was having trouble finding good melodies for that chord progression.

Thanks again for the awesome review, i'll make sure to review yours equally well when (if!) you submit one, which i'm looking forward to you doing btw! :D

[Flowbox]

haha, sweet

this is like nothing i've ever heard on ng. im not too sure about the volume fluctuations. this was so diverse and had a bunch fo different styles blended into one nice piece. though sometimes i think things got a little carried away and didn;t fit as well for example... 2:55 to 3:05. it was strange to hear that much change.
sweetass drums .

and i will say another thing... the title really was the thing that hooked me^^ 4/5
-crepth

[Moments in Time]

nice!

i really like it, you're amazing at setting a desired mood! it was varied enough that i wasn't bored at any time. sounds like it would have been a great movie by this.

also, it reminds me of something for Heroes... maybe you were subconsciously inspired. O.o
5/5
-crepth