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lol, no joke i was heading for the exit button

but then i read the guys review below me and though i'd wait. it was worth it. you had some really sick beats and sfx in there. i like the bass but maybe there is a little too much distortion on it at times. but really, you need to change the beginning. maybe you should master the thing that first gets attention with the most care.
nice job though. 5/5 and a download. but there are still somethings to work on.
i have a dnb i posted a while ago, maybe you could check it out, i think its a little different than this one though !D

-crepth

suppi responds:

i just removed the beginning actually, hopefully ppl will like it better now

pretty awesome song here

i like the choice of sounds and mood in the beginning but i was really expecting something stronger in the climax. and i think have more of a concentration on the bass would help that out. after a while it starts to get boring with just the synth pad things playing the same notes over and over again. maybe if you had a really strong wet bass like in Karbon- Psychopath, it would help out the interest level. you need to look at that song once you get the chance and perhaps consider going in that direction for the bass for this song... i think it would greatly improve the song.
4/5 good job and if you'd like, i have a dnb song up on my page that i submitted, if you could listen to it, i'd appreciate it.

-crepth

why does this have such a low rating!!!

this awesome! those sick drums just keep it flowing, the bass is just driving it through, and the guitar has some great eqing. this song has style and i guess thats what people are missing when they vote it down into the three's. get someone good to do the lyrics. it might sound good if they can rap but i think you have something sweet right here.
5/5
keep it up. 'n if you don't mind, think you could give my page a look? i'd appreciate it.
-crepth

bigbeek responds:

yea im searching and im on a tight deadline cuz submissions for the contest close july 9 th so im looking for anyone that awesome and willing to do the rap

and yea i'll give your page a look

sounds good but needs work

the first bit was really nice and had the ambiance that you want in an... ambient song... like the nice reverb and distant percussion but i think once you introduce the bass and guitar everything gets really muddy. maybe those instruments have too much reverb and all of it piled on top of one another makes it dirty. try cleaning that part up and maybe have more of that awesome intro before you have too much going on. also i liked the sfx you had going on behind the guitar and bass.
keep up the work on this and pm me when you finish it. and if you have the time, could you check out my two latest songs, i'd appreciate it.
4/5

-crepth

D3ATH responds:

Thanks for the tips :) I'll certainly check out your songs when I get a chance.

why is it glitchy at times?

was that on purpose? sounds like it would be the .flp version. and the flager makes it a little harsh at times.
pretty cool though. 4/5

sweet but

i think if you want to make it about 10 or 15 bpm faster just to get the anxious feeling across better. great instrument choice though.
-crepth

awesome job

very unique mix of styles... i've never heard anything of its kind before. and with such basic samples too. nice job.
in my opinion, this should have been the first of the week.
5/5

-crepth

Rig responds:

Maestrorage stoled mah cookie :(

Thanks for the review, man!

ill be honest and

tell you i wasn't a fan of your stuff at all really, but listening to this i'm getting down to it, but i really like your instrument choice. i can see you use FL but where do you get the swooshing sfx? it adds a cool effect. one thing this song lacks is uniqueness. the melody choice just doesn't stick with me. its more the choice of instruments, like i said, and the way you started out the song... (i think you should have continued in that direction btw) ... that hooked me.
great job nonetheless obviously. 5/5
if you'd care to, i have a new song i submitted last week. it'd mean a lot if you took a listen. thanks and keep these songs comin'

-crepth

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Well you took the time to tell me what you liked and didn't like so I'll take the time to see your stuff too. I didn't really have much effect on the melody because I wanted to keep the melody close to the original as it being a remix.

For the sweeps you can use anything that creates white noise. The right mixing and XY controls can get you the effect you want.

awesome. but

i think the biggest or maybe only problem is the recording quality of the vocals. i think you could have even fixed it with some clever mastering. its just that it doesn't match up with the quality of the rest of the piece. the composition of the song is good but vocals and perhaps even the tone of the singing messes things up a bit.
4/5

-crepth

MaestroRage responds:

Well, as I've stated on my other name, I can't afford good equipment right now. We're poor, and writing music for free doesn't exactly make me some kind of a supestar. No, I was not off key. I've listened to it constantly, and I made sure it was on the right pitch. That's the first thing I concentrate on. Thanks for listening.
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