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Neon-Crepth

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catchy but...

catchy and all, but go easy on the reverb. it all sounds like its it an empty room and it takes away stuff...
i would have toned down the clavichord thing too, resonance-wise.
-crepth

nice and unique.

i really enjoyed the first part and just the way it sounded together. but i think it progressively lost that feel through the song and it made it a lot worse. it would have been nice to hear a digital-like wah wah-kinda thing in a melody. great concept, just lacking those things.

4/5.
-crepth

hey, me again

everything is pretty much great. the vocals are a little better than what i remember it used to be. try recording it in a bathroom, that might help. the vocals just dont match the rest of the song. its like the instruments are close and their sound bounces off a distant wall when the vocals are in a tight confined space which the instruments are sitting on top of. ...better though. i wouldn't bother to redo this again, just try making the vocals better in yur other songs.

5/5

jnry3 responds:

Hey thanks for your review! I really needed that!

Hmm... a bathroom? Maybe a reverb effect will simulate that.

I'm trying to interpret 4th sentence of your review... and I think the "distant wall" is the delay effect for the synth guitars. I'll keep that in mind.

Hehe... too late. I'm redoing the vocal tracks on the song after getting a new mic.

Again, many, many thanks for your review! ^_^

cool man!

this had nice drums, Awesome!- bass line, and well mastered guitar. but the only thing i had a problem with was the singing. i don't know if it was the voice itself or the over pronunciation, but whichever one it was it wasn't as good as it could have sounded (reverb and filtering-wise)

4/5. nice job man. check out my songs if you have the time! thnx

-crepth

jnry3 responds:

Hmm... maybe it's just the mastering. I did some remastering, by the way. Check if the problem is still there.

I'll pass by your site soon. Thanks for the review! ^_^

Remastered 192kbps version here: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/106651

wootr !!

creating a new genre are we? XD this is like a retro industrial club thingy. VERY cool.
the beginning reminded me of Shoes. but then it got much better. extremely catchy.
a DL from me 10/10 and 5/5. you've gotta do more of these!

-crepth

cool!

nice 8bit man. all it needs is some of those sweet 8bit percussions! (also, next time don't go as crazy with the panning. just my opinion though...)
4/5 'cause of the lack of percussion.

-crepth

the-grimlord responds:

Well I don't really get what you are trying to say lol
Anyways, I did this song on my childhood keyboards, like I've said. It doesn't have many effects. Actually, it lacks of effects very much lol Thanx in any case. I'll try to make better songies in the future. :)

hey man long time no speak...

i dont know if we've talked since i switched accounts but im mawkeetus from bmc-audio. you've come a long way from what i can recall, FRONT PAGE! this is nicely mastered and is pretty catchy. i just think it could have used a little bass.

nice job. 5/5 'n 8/10. check out my songs on this account if u want.

-crepth

Kid2Will responds:

yeah dude its been a while, and this is the 2nd time! that ive been on the front page, i dunno how it works tho. randomly chosen or stats... NE way thanks for the review!

very soothing!

i think japan attack was under the impression that you downloaded the lyrics and added the piano or something... you do write and sing these songs right?

well, beautiful harmony, cool lyrics, and a great start to the full song!! in the full one just have better quality low notes in the piano, they seemed a little buzzy. 9/10 and 5/5.

-crepth

its okay

this was a little too repetitive and it lacked bass in a bad way.

not bad though. i'm 3in' it.

-crepth

bravo...

seriously man, you should be thrown in jail for melting so many peoples' faces!

do you record these songs? if you do, that's just inhuman. if it's not, this is still amazing.

-crepth

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