good
this kept me interested throughout the whole thing, so nice job on that (the timing and stuff) but the climax was a little weak and never really reached an exciting part... maybe some better music would have helped you with that.
4/5
-crepth
good
this kept me interested throughout the whole thing, so nice job on that (the timing and stuff) but the climax was a little weak and never really reached an exciting part... maybe some better music would have helped you with that.
4/5
-crepth
meh~
this was really boring for me, i read some words and saw tweened shapes. the only fun part about it was pressing space. i respect if it's about a brother or a friend or something, but this is just what i think about the animation. good choice of music though
2/5
-crepth
Haha, you have A.D.D.
great as usual, but
great as usual, but i think you should make their voices a little different. You make everything really well-timed and paced, which keeps things interesting, but the voices make it repetative.
5/5
-crepth
great but...
great but not as good as the first one, this one was more corny and generic. im not saying that it was corny and generic though... just more.....
5/5
-crepth
yeah man, i still don't know.
still too slow, and the jokes are still too cheesy for me. i dont know what it is... the plot the animation or the jokes but its not doin' it.
3/5
are there anymore parts to it? lemme know if there are.
-crepth
great!
i love the style, the rhythm of the 'squiggles'... or whatever they were, the black background throughout the whole thing, the music. great choices! you caught me by surprise at the end with "to my boyfriend" ! not many girls animating on ng that i know of really. kudos.
5/5 10/10. if u care, check out my page in a few weeks. im thinkin bout submitin a flash.
-crepth
I'll be sure to.
Most girls don't animate, do they? I guess I'm special :B
beautiful... just great
this will definitely be on the front page in no time at all!
i really like your style of animation, camera work, and background art as well. Dont abandon those things, they're what make this flash amazing. try doing a little bit more on the story of things, it will probably make it more interesting and make people want to see more... (there's probably a prequel or something that i haven't seen though that explains the story)
5/5
-crepth
wow
probably the best choice of music, great photo choices. the best style to animate it in... it was kinda scary, which is what i guess you were going for.
the message was executed perfectly. great job. do more.
5/5 if you get the chance check out my songs,thnx
Thank You.
I'm glad you liked it:)
I'll be sure to give your songs a listen when I get the time:)
good but...
this was good but i thought it was a little slow going, i expected it to end like 3 times and i almost closed it. this was kinda funny but just make things faster.
4/5
the audio...
i don't think it was the fact that i hate British accents or not but the audio was obnoxious, it would screech sometimes. Also your characters could have be better constructed. ok job on the dubbing, though it wasn't anything to go crazy about.
3/5
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