lol well...
i think i speak for every animator when i say we've all animated various proportioned stick figures dying in a cliff on an apparently hot day... i know i've done it.
i guess its just a step to being better. you kinda defied the laws of physics a few times there. if you get the physics right you'll solve a huge problem right off the bat. the voice acting gets annoying. lol, seriously nobody really wants to listen to your voice for that long. especially when you half whisper to kept the recording process quieter... you had some pretty smooth things in there. just do some practicing and you'll get better. im in the same phase XD.
2/5
-crepth