i really like the style, choice of music, and effects. everything is really smooth moving and works together really well.
the credits are a little illegible, so just be careful not to over-do that shaky effect.
the ole' monster and lure idea... lol. pretty well executed except in terms of sound and timing. but your animation is off. he shrinks and grows a lot, and i'm not talking about the arm stretching, that's understood. good job though. don't get me wrong, i liked it- just didn't know if anyone else mentioned that one important thing.
i saw about 3 seconds of fbf animation. i think you need a little more to make it interesting to watch. and the music doesn't really match. you have the style of calvin and hobbes down pretty well in some areas but i think you needed some more time to make this better. good idea.
lol, if only
your skills in making music transferred over to this. it was funny, but a person who clearly masters his songs to perfection, i'd imagine a little eqing of the audio would be involuntary. w/e. lol 'n this reminded me of family guy type humor :D
another great one but
with like an hour more of time you could have the mouth match over the voice a lot better. it seemed pretty rushed the way you had random mouth movements most the time.
nice little Wall-E type animation.
but the one thing walle has besides amazing animation and graphics is personality. it even says so in the trailer for it. it wouldn't have been that hard to add some personality to the character just by having different walks and sfx and arm gestures.
good job though. it was enjoyable. 5/5
probably one of the best cartoons on ng
anything this long has to be genuinely funny and captivating for us to watch it all the way through, or else we'll just go to another flash. but you completely nailed this. absolutely hilarious. you had the right amount of explosions and change of scenery to keep all audiences watching. the see no evil hear no evil and speak no evil must have been the FUNNIEST part!! XD
5/5 i cannot wait for the next one to come out.
but too slow. "newground flashes are for people with short attention spans" lol, take your own advice. the voices sounded good and everything, had bad mouth movements but was way too slow. speed it up to keep interest. also you had some pretty funny jokes.
4/5 nice job.
pretty cool series. lots of clips that are irrelevant to each other and the fight scenes are a little short and boring- not enough variety. uhmmmm and also don't do the blurring clip in the middle of a fast movement. the one example that was really obvious is when the blue fairy flailed her arms in the air. you blurred the movement waayyy too much for how slow it was. its not that important but its something you could work on. and your dubbing is really smooth i think that's one of the stronger things about this. the audio is also reasonable quality but you need to find more voice actors. a lot of them sound very similar.
4/5 keep up the series!
im sure someone else has suggested it but
i think you should look into getting one of those virtual camera things... the one that moves around with the characters and zooms in and such. i mean you're pretty limited with just using sprites so i think having another element would make it much more enjoyable to watch than just a still zoomed out shot...
go ask around on the forums. im sure you'll find one. i know im looking around.
I'm currently using some camera works for Ch.10, you should check it out when it's out! Yeah i too noticed the static camera view for my fight scenes and thought of using some camera work, but it's too late by the time I realized that.
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