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lol well...

i think i speak for every animator when i say we've all animated various proportioned stick figures dying in a cliff on an apparently hot day... i know i've done it.
i guess its just a step to being better. you kinda defied the laws of physics a few times there. if you get the physics right you'll solve a huge problem right off the bat. the voice acting gets annoying. lol, seriously nobody really wants to listen to your voice for that long. especially when you half whisper to kept the recording process quieter... you had some pretty smooth things in there. just do some practicing and you'll get better. im in the same phase XD.
2/5

-crepth

nice job on this!

so, just out of curiosity... how'd you get Barack Obama to do the vocals at the end?

good animation. you timed the scenes well. some actions looked weird and unnatural but it's ok. cool character design. interesting, somewhat unique concept. a little bit of a background story that you could build something off of- just MAKE SURE not to make something so cool cliche` ... it would kill the whole thing. so make it an interesting story. the vocals are pretty good, but they don't match the mouths that much. spend a little time on that so we understand were the sound is coming from.
keep it up. can't wait for 3 ^^
5/5
-crepth

great but

i can't tell you how much better this would be with good back grounds. seriously it dragged it down a lot and it's a shame cause with a little more time spent on 'em, you'd have a best on the portal.

really cool but

...but there were a lot of parts that were unnecessarily long. such as the comedy bits (madness and alien hominid parts come to mind.)

keep it up though man. it had a pretty cool plot too.
5/5
-crepth

hmm

big fan of the series. but this was a little disappointing, i know every series has to have a plot section where it's quieter and i think those help the story but this wasn't as good as the others in my opinion. also perhaps you could stray away from using as many photo backgrounds as you do. it has a weird contrast to your style of cartooning.
despite all that, you still get a 5/5 because its awesome.

-crepth

dnzTV responds:

i really really want to say that there are NO photo backdrops.. EVERYTHING is done by hand.. EVERYTHING. but hey thanks anyhoo :)

great man...

this was pretty funny, a little inaccurate though. it was antigone who was banished for burying Polynieces and he then he gouged his eyes out because he realized all that crap he did. i love how you pronounce Oedipus as Eat-a-puss.
5/5

-crepth

awesome.

my favorite was captain falcon. (he's also my favorite brawl character^^)

5/5, fav, 10/10

-crepth

i loved this!!!

so funny. i was really getting into the music! so catchy... i dont know why others didn't like the music. that was really funny how the background color and horizon changed XD. i didn't get how he became the same color as the bg, then i just started laughing.
5/5

-crepth

uhm

good concept. but the voice acting was absolutely terrible- completely non expressive. and like others were saying the animation could have been better.

your cartoon characters are good though, i liked the mom. ...but its mostly in the voices.
3/5

-crepth

uhm

yeah i didn't even watch the whole thing it was that boring... you need t speed things up and animate better. that demon's voice is also really crappy. just work on animating more and a faster pace.
2/5

-crepth

BiffTheTimid responds:

You didn't watch the whole thing? Wow, you're an ass.

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