Neon-Crepth's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zelda's Lullaby (loop)]

o.O

u didnt change anything... even though you made it well, like mastering-wise, itsno different... switch it up if you resubmit it.

2/5

The-MickMad responds:

it is meant to be the most faithful to te original...

[You're Kinda Funny]

wth?

if the only thing in your song is vocals, dont make it really soft. it sounds like you're mumbling this is the corner of a room like crying or something... the reverb is really off. and your singing gets a little nasally. i dont think this would really hold up in an album if you have no bg music. and dont have AIM up either... somebody logged in...

0/5

MrSwauv responds:

Sorry. Thanx 4 da tipz.

[[eWorm]]

this is awesome!!^^

you know, normally im not the biggest fan of breakbeat, but this was an amazing one. great intro, interesting drums, sweet bass and 'funky' thing there. the sound effects you chose worked really well too. that was a really cool intustrial-type thing at 2:43.5. but one last thing... i think the ending could have been stringer.

5/5 10/10, great job! 'n if its not too much to ask, u think you could drop by my page and check out my new song, Crepth- Renewal. (and comments are greatly appreciated :p)

-crepth

Gusto responds:

thanks for the sweet review mate. I felt as though my music production (as far as dnb goes) was going in just one direction so I felt the need to try to change it up a bit. I didn't put as much effort into this one as I would have liked but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless :) Will check your track out.

[Riding the Wind]

really nice

i like the airy peaceful feel a lot. i know i said it before but ill say it again, i think the quiet 'ooooo' pad in the bg should have been a lot louder. it was just such a nice sound and a catchy melody. if you resubmit it after revising it i would want to hear more of that. nice clap. and hi hats. speaking of drums i think that kick was cool except i dont think it should have had the hat sounding along with it. the beginning measures was the only time i noticed it a lot. sweet mellow bass, it was well mastered.

im alright with the piano solo being in there, it fits nicely, but it wasn't a very strong melody... well, it could have been better... i'll say that.
the flangus fade in at 2:20ish was a really nice feature!
i can see the part from 2:40 on to 3:00 being a great menu song for some game. il l send by brother a link and suggest it to be put in a game.^^

5/5 ill pm if i ever make a full 8bit and submit it or if i submit that renewal one...

-crepth

x-Exodus-X responds:

Thanks for your great review crepth! As a response to what you said, I know what you mean by the hi hats, but I felt the build sounded better with them than without them. Thanks for all the compliments, i'm glad you liked it!
The piano melody I agree with you completely, I was having trouble finding good melodies for that chord progression.

Thanks again for the awesome review, i'll make sure to review yours equally well when (if!) you submit one, which i'm looking forward to you doing btw! :D

[Sonic Advance2:SkyCanyon boss]

yay sonic!

cool hihats. nice square-type things, the dble-kick part was a little empty though.
4/5
-crepth

Gorekiller responds:

Hey thanks ! Yeah, this is an "unfinished" version... I'll make it better and RE-upload it. Thanks for the review !

[Starburst (AA Mix)]

really great man!^^

i loved the airy sound of the song; had a nice feel. it got a lil muddy at times b/c of that though, so just keep a listen for that. cool sounding drums, nice synths, good variation and timing of variation of melody; it really kept me listening and bobbing my head. nice sfx. well thought out mastering. w/e your fellow artists told you, it really paid off. nice job on this one!
5/5
-crepth

dragonsteak responds:

thanks a lot mate, some other people have pointed out some clipping issues so I guess I'll jack up my soft clipper... thanks for the support though!

[HelgiB - Day Dream]

coolsong man

wyldfyre just means that the intruments are really generic, and i agree. like the main synth, its that basic saw thats sharp and shwooshy... not a very good adjective but yaeh. same thing with that wet acidbass.
its really repetitive and gets boring about half way through. and some more melodies in there.
3/5
-crepth

HelgiB responds:

alright, but the song is just in about 02 mins. I don't realy seem to notice the bass getting repeative. That bass is called Pitch Bass many artist use it. :D
any thank you for the review.

[k.Chezzi]

lol, k.Chezzi....

yeah, im not going to ask you why you called it chezzi, but i woud suggest choosing a mroe captivating title. honestly, after reading it i was like, okay this is not going to be good at all. so, yeah....
but the song is really good, thedifferent parts of the song are really different and it keeps things interesting, uhhh, i knwo there were a few off tempo things but i won't bother u about that b/c it was a minor mistake. i think you should have run it through an equilizer to get rid of some junk noise. also it gets a lil' too loud at parts.

overall, i think it was really nice song, interesting composing. and ill look at more of your future stuff.
5/5
-crepth

kiwifish responds:

thank you for the review.
yeah maybe the title is a bad idea.
I'd be happy to suggetions for a different title! I really couldn't think of anything ... lol.

[Alone in the living room]

what were you thinking.

you're right its not that good, its like not even music. honestly, you need to develop a musical ear, cause that was just a loud, deep buzzing noise with some string. i dont think you should have submitted this... sorry.
0/5. get some structure and a little melody going, and dont make things repetitive.
-crepth

Smidly responds:

I certainly agree. Although I cant help but wonder what stopped you from voting a 1? If I improve on it im keeping the buzz though.

[Shattered Affection]

good idea but...

good idea but you didn't really do anything with it, i think with a little bit more effort it could have been way better. nice job though. and dont hold back on the drums, they were really quiet and dull.
4/5
-crepth

JinNJuice responds:

Perhaps you do not understand the emotions that I feel.