seems like an honest attempt but
yea man, the arms are way short, the face is guesswork, and the shading doesn't tell the viewer anything about the form.
ask a friend to pose for you, or more effectively, look in a mirror. you need to be able to record the figure before you can make it up.
Thanks for the advice. I frequenty take pictures of my friends in poses and attempt to draw from that but this time I felt like having a go at doing it from my imagination.
I see what you mean about the shading but unfortunately I can't do much else with a biro : /
Well, I know I've still got a long road ahead of me. Thanks for the review.
the only inconsistency though is the shoulder. go in there and define some bones. the way it looks right now is just a bulbous muscle :p
this is now my desktop.
very cool. and i'm usually not a fan of the chaos doodles. what was the first thing you put down?
(and get rid of that margin!)
The first part i put down wqas the "I cant sleep" Bubble lol.
Gods im so blazed XD
you forgot the mane. i'm deducting a point.
(its hypno right?)
(poke-pun intended) gosh i'm terrible.
hatching and pencil work is wicked. has a real style embedded in it. keep it up!
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