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Neon-Crepth

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seems like an honest attempt but

yea man, the arms are way short, the face is guesswork, and the shading doesn't tell the viewer anything about the form.

ask a friend to pose for you, or more effectively, look in a mirror. you need to be able to record the figure before you can make it up.

Safst3r responds:

Thanks for the advice. I frequenty take pictures of my friends in poses and attempt to draw from that but this time I felt like having a go at doing it from my imagination.
I see what you mean about the shading but unfortunately I can't do much else with a biro : /

Well, I know I've still got a long road ahead of me. Thanks for the review.

its a common problem among all of us.

maybe in your world the clouds change color as the sun sets? maybe try that. add some pinks and oranges in them. btw, i have an obsession with clouds, sunsets and silhouettes. so i like this very much.

Kero-the-boy-killer responds:

Aye me too! =w=

this is now my desktop.

very cool. and i'm usually not a fan of the chaos doodles. what was the first thing you put down?

(and get rid of that margin!)

J-I-F responds:

The first part i put down wqas the "I cant sleep" Bubble lol.

Gods im so blazed XD

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