Neon-Crepth's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Rythm Kicks In]

seems like an honest attempt but

yea man, the arms are way short, the face is guesswork, and the shading doesn't tell the viewer anything about the form.

ask a friend to pose for you, or more effectively, look in a mirror. you need to be able to record the figure before you can make it up.

Safst3r responds:

Thanks for the advice. I frequenty take pictures of my friends in poses and attempt to draw from that but this time I felt like having a go at doing it from my imagination.
I see what you mean about the shading but unfortunately I can't do much else with a biro : /

Well, I know I've still got a long road ahead of me. Thanks for the review.

[rise of a fallen angel]

pretty nice

the only inconsistency though is the shoulder. go in there and define some bones. the way it looks right now is just a bulbous muscle :p

[Sleep never comes...]

this is now my desktop.

very cool. and i'm usually not a fan of the chaos doodles. what was the first thing you put down?

(and get rid of that margin!)

J-I-F responds:

The first part i put down wqas the "I cant sleep" Bubble lol.

Gods im so blazed XD

[Hypno is ready for bed, champ]

lol

you forgot the mane. i'm deducting a point.

(its hypno right?)

[Team Rocket is wicked ill, son]

ditto

(poke-pun intended) gosh i'm terrible.

hatching and pencil work is wicked. has a real style embedded in it. keep it up!