Score: 5

"uhm"

submission: Outlaw pt.1

date: March 16, 2008

yeah i didn't even watch the whole thing it was that boring... you need t speed things up and animate better. that demon's voice is also really crappy. just work on animating more and a faster pace.
2/5

-crepth

Score: 8

"im not a big fan but"

submission: Primal War 16

date: March 16, 2008

i do enjoy watching a few of these. i dont follow this series religiously but its fun to see whats going on with them once in a while. part of the reason that i haven't watched all of them is the animation. like... the story is good i guess and the art, as in the backgrounds and characters, is interesting. but the animation is so choppy sometimes and the movements are mechanical. really, you need to look at all angles of a person walking, running, jumping, etc. b/c those shots of them running are relatively pathetic.

on the contrary, i dont think it was as stupid as some people were saying to have a quieter episode. it can enhance a story if you do it right. However, i dont think you did it right. if this was supposed to show emotion and set a mood, you need to get a lot more facial expressions and show what everybody's feeling.

i am looking forward to the next episode, but honestly... watch people walk, do short little loops of someone walking, stuff like that b/c it's really bringing your work down.
4/5 when will the next one be out?

-crepth

Score: 10

""En aquel entonces"? o.O"

submission: Eres Veneno ++

date: March 15, 2008

were you the girl or the guy? lol, doesn't seem like it was the most pleasant school.
i love your style of animating. its so smooth sometimes, i just wonder how you did it. (i especially liked the part where his legs are flailing while he's hanging from teh roof) i kinda got lost in the story though, not very clear.
5/5 im adding you as my favorite artist.^^

-crepth

Score: 7

"well"

submission: Elevator Action++

date: March 15, 2008

the animations great. im a big fan of 8bit but the sound effects were even too cheesy fro me. 8bit can be intense, you should have chosen a better song.
4/5

Score: 9

"WOW!"

submission: Alex Seryoua: Episode I

date: March 9, 2008

this is great! perhaps one of the better flashes on here.
the sound is good but it could be better. (the alarm wasn't great at all) also with the sound, tweak the reverb and dryness and wetness to add an atmospheric element.
the backgrounds are great, the animation could be a little less herky-jerky, but other than that, this is awesome.

and since you're really doing this as a movie somewhat, you need to add more suspense and things like that. for example, when she was looking over the ridge in the end, you could have made that more suspenseful... not that we wouldn't expect it to be Earth or anything... it would just help if you took a shot of her face or something before you actually saw the earth.

this seems like it will be Very promising series. can't wait^^
5/5

-crepth

Score: 10

"so great!"

submission: Pass-my-Flash 2

date: March 5, 2008

this is honestly one of the best flashes on here i've seen. only a story like this could be made in a collab. all of the styles complimented each other and it was a good idea to link all of them together with that background.
5/5

-crepth

Score: 8

"pretty cool man..."

submission: Omelas

date: February 28, 2008

i think your ideas are great, but the detail in the backgrounds dont match up with your animation. the people walking down that lane with the tree canopy thing, the lighting on the people didnt match up, i know its kinda impossible to match it perfectly, but i think you need to find a median between background and animated figures. i've noticed the same thing in other things of yours. also hold back on the amount of tweening you use, it can make something great turn into something "cheap".

5/5 keep it up man!

-crepth

Score: 8

"nice!"

submission: Surface EP 2 (Part 1/ 2)

date: February 21, 2008

this was pretty cool. somewhat original story, well... it could be. the music could have been a lot better. find more fitting music. like when he flipped the quarter, it should have been really intense. the art could also be better. like the shading, make it softer... unless this is just your style.

4/5 nice job, ill look for the next one.

-crepth

Score: 7

"nto bad but..."

submission: Static & Joy

date: February 18, 2008

this isn't bad but its not terribly funny either. it just seems like an attempt to remake "the rejected cartoons". and attempt that fell just a little short.

3/5 not bad though....

-crepth

Score: 8

"very good!"

submission: Valhalla Knights 2

date: February 10, 2008

i really liked it. it has okay style, and great bg's. but i think the fighting should have been faster... thats really the only advice i have.

ha, boobies... 5/5