Score: 5

"lol well..."

submission: An Unlucky Day

date: June 7, 2008

i think i speak for every animator when i say we've all animated various proportioned stick figures dying in a cliff on an apparently hot day... i know i've done it.
i guess its just a step to being better. you kinda defied the laws of physics a few times there. if you get the physics right you'll solve a huge problem right off the bat. the voice acting gets annoying. lol, seriously nobody really wants to listen to your voice for that long. especially when you half whisper to kept the recording process quieter... you had some pretty smooth things in there. just do some practicing and you'll get better. im in the same phase XD.
2/5

-crepth

Score: 7

"its fun at first but"

submission: Drift

date: June 2, 2008

it got boring after a while. maybe introduce the new elements a little more frequently... but after about level 8-9 i had to stop. wasn't as captivating in the beginning. good job though, i was really smooth programming.
4/5

-crepth

Score: 10

"nice job on this!"

submission: 2 - The Story of Khale

date: May 10, 2008

so, just out of curiosity... how'd you get Barack Obama to do the vocals at the end?

good animation. you timed the scenes well. some actions looked weird and unnatural but it's ok. cool character design. interesting, somewhat unique concept. a little bit of a background story that you could build something off of- just MAKE SURE not to make something so cool cliche` ... it would kill the whole thing. so make it an interesting story. the vocals are pretty good, but they don't match the mouths that much. spend a little time on that so we understand were the sound is coming from.
keep it up. can't wait for 3 ^^
5/5
-crepth

Score: 8

"great but"

submission: Operation: Warehouse

date: May 1, 2008

i can't tell you how much better this would be with good back grounds. seriously it dragged it down a lot and it's a shame cause with a little more time spent on 'em, you'd have a best on the portal.

Score: 10

"really cool but"

submission: N.G. Showdown

date: April 29, 2008

...but there were a lot of parts that were unnecessarily long. such as the comedy bits (madness and alien hominid parts come to mind.)

keep it up though man. it had a pretty cool plot too.
5/5
-crepth

Score: 9

"hmm"

submission: CoreyStuckInPurgatoryVII

date: April 14, 2008

big fan of the series. but this was a little disappointing, i know every series has to have a plot section where it's quieter and i think those help the story but this wasn't as good as the others in my opinion. also perhaps you could stray away from using as many photo backgrounds as you do. it has a weird contrast to your style of cartooning.
despite all that, you still get a 5/5 because its awesome.

-crepth

Score: 9

"great man..."

submission: Oedipus's RAD Adventure

date: April 3, 2008

this was pretty funny, a little inaccurate though. it was antigone who was banished for burying Polynieces and he then he gouged his eyes out because he realized all that crap he did. i love how you pronounce Oedipus as Eat-a-puss.
5/5

-crepth

Score: 10

"awesome."

submission: NiN10Doh!

date: April 3, 2008

my favorite was captain falcon. (he's also my favorite brawl character^^)

5/5, fav, 10/10

-crepth

Score: 10

"i loved this!!!"

submission: Looking Up

date: March 26, 2008

so funny. i was really getting into the music! so catchy... i dont know why others didn't like the music. that was really funny how the background color and horizon changed XD. i didn't get how he became the same color as the bg, then i just started laughing.
5/5

-crepth

Score: 6

"uhm"

submission: Ovaltine FIEND

date: March 23, 2008

good concept. but the voice acting was absolutely terrible- completely non expressive. and like others were saying the animation could have been better.

your cartoon characters are good though, i liked the mom. ...but its mostly in the voices.
3/5

-crepth